The Disappointment Locker

Never have so many voted so overwhelmingly for so little as the members Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences did for The Hurt Locker, this years Best Motion Picture.

Th’ Gaussling sat through a screening of The Hurt Locker last weekend. I must say that it was competently produced and directed. Without a doubt, the cast and crew did a fine bit of journeyman film making. However, an outstanding bit of film making it was not. It should have been titled Opportunities Lost.

What is so tragic about this movie is that all of the elements of an outstanding motion picture were there. An action packed setting, the threat of explosive death, flawed characters, intrigue, and comraderie. But somehow the director was unable to pull it together. Despite all of the raw materials available for a cliff hanger, director Kathryn Bigelow managed to patch together a picture that utterly lacks the fizz and crackle of a thriller. It’s as emotionally flat as a pancake.

Here is my primary beef with The Hurt Locker. It lacks application of the fundamentals of storytelling. While there is a lead character, the emotional hook that connects a viewer with the character is missing.  The viewers emotional connection to the lead character, Sergeant First Class William James, is lost through a series of missed opportunities. The director tries to paint this character as a man of steel or a “wildman”. But never convincingly. Even the attempt to hook you in with his half-hearted try to befriend a camp rat (an Iraqi kid) was botched.

The film makers tried to give this picture a documentary feel with the handheld photography. But it doesn’t catch. There are movies out there that use this method successfully- District 9, Cloverfield, and especially Saving Private Ryan.  But to do this successfully, in my opinion, the director must focus on a the characters.  One of the characters in The Hurt Locker was, by default, Iraq. But the development of even this “character” was poor.

To be compelling, the director must use some narrative trick to put the viewer on the spot with the characters. Either through a first person presence by a principle character as with Private Ryan, Cloverfield, District 9, or Apocalypse Now, or some other storytelling device like good character development on sympathetic characters. View the  Blackhawk Down and look at the difference.  In Blackhawk Down, there was better development of Somalia as a kind of character. It was not a sympathetic character, but it certainly had more depth.

OK. They did a few things right. They did not fall into the ridiculous cliche about the trick detonators. You know the scenario, there are many wires around the bomb and if the wrong one is cut, the detonator fires immediately. This is a regrettable dramatic device introduced foisted generations ago on ignorant audiences to raise the suspense level during the bomb defusing scene. Well guess what, audiences are still ignorant but at least the writer & film makers had some integrity this time. The EOD guy was portrayed doing the proper thing- looking for the initiator. That is where the drama is.

All in all, I would recommend viewing this movie if you have NetFlix so the financial investment is low. But I wouldn”t spend $19.95 on a DVD.

4 thoughts on “The Disappointment Locker

  1. John Spevacek

    So now that you have demonstrated writing skills, intelligence, professional acting experience and understanding of the critical elements of a storytelling, have you seriously thought about trying your hand at screenwriting? Hoffmann and Djerassi did a few years back with “Oxygen”, although you could certainly expand away from science. It is certainly something you can moonlight in. I am serious.

    P.S., I have a brother-in-law out in the L.A. are and he knows this goy who has this cousin who used to live next door to…..so have your people call my people and we can do lunch sometime. Ciao baby!

    P.P.S., I don’t think the intelligence attribute is needed; based on what I’ve seen lately, it might even be an impedement.

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    1. gaussling Post author

      Hi John,

      Thanks for the comment. A group of us have formed a theatre company on the side and are heavily involved already in community theatre. We just finished our second production and are already working on productions 3, 4, & 5. I finally understand what it means to be a producer- you’re only as good as your last production.

      Theatre is a kind of attraction, and running an attraction is about putting butts in seats. The actors can fuss about the artistic merits, but the producers are constantly fretting about ticket and concession sales.

      The crowd that you have to attract in community theatre are the blue hairs and Q-tips. Retired folks are the bread and butter of community theatre and your selection of plays has to respond to the blue hair demographic in a big way. It’s sell sell sell. Besides, the acoustics are always better with a full house.

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  2. Gaussling's Weird Friend Les

    Five reasons why “Hurt Locker” is the best movie of the year:

    1) No insipid “buddy line” said at the beginning and predictably repeated at the end of the movie.
    2) No ober-annoying supporting character that contributes nothing to the story and has way too many lines.
    3) David Caruso wasn’t in it.
    4) It wasn’t a badly rehashed remake of a tired old story remade in 2008 with gratuitous sex scenes.
    5) No vampires.

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